![]() In this case, the proper verb is “scratched” not “itched”. There were also sporadic grammatical errors, an example being “She itched her ear ” (p. This sudden change confused me at first glance since the thoughts weren’t italicized, often ruining the flow of the narrative. These thoughts are in present tense while the narration is in past tense. There are many instances where Dimple or Rishi’s internal dialogue interrupt the third person narration. Review (Minor Spoilers):Įspecially in the beginning, the writing in When Dimple Met Rishi is choppy. ![]() But when opposites clash, love works hard to prove itself in the most unexpected ways. His parents think Dimple is the perfect match for him, but she’s got other plans…ĭimple and Rishi may think they have each other figured out. He’s rich, good-looking and a hopeless romantic. Her main aim in life is to escape her traditional parents, get to university and begin her plan for tech world domination. ![]() February 14th, 2018 – February 27th, 2018 Rating: Format: ![]()
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